Thursday, October 29, 2009
RJA #11a: Introduction
This week is a week of importance because it is the celebration of Darwin's "Origin Of Species" 150th anniversary. One hundred and fifty years ago Darwin wrote a book that began to change the perspectives and ideas of the world in a tremendous way that incorporates science into the meaning of life. Darwin's theories of natural selection and evolution still to this day play a major part in our societies. When discussing endangered species and natural selection there seems to be a problem in our society because our society preserves endangered species, however If Darwin were to see that humans are protecting endangered species he would surly have objected to the idea. The preservation of endangered species should be stopped if the theory of evolution is accurate because natural selection would create situations in which certain species are forced to either adaptation or become extinct, survival of the fittest would also ensure that the strong survive and the weak become hunted to provoke an evolution that balances the components of nature.
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So far this is a good introduction that clearly states what your paper will be addressing. One thing that I would change is the first sentence. The week you wrote this it might have been that specific week, but it isn't now or it won't be when the teacher reads; therefor it will be a false statement. You could say something like, "we just recently passed the week of...". But so far this is great, keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteIntro looks good to me bro, you seem to be following the guidelines pretty well.
ReplyDeletegood work